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If you had to be an animal, which would you choose. Why?
Friday, August 19, 2011
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This is actually written by Mr.Wong Ling Wei(780922135041) from PPG BCN01. He could not comment on this blog so I assist him by posting his work. By the way, good Job Wong!
ReplyDeleteI would like to be a bird, for me a bird symbolizes true freedom. I want to fly freely in the blue sky, to find out my own stage of life. At the time, I have a pair of wings, which get freedom of flying in the sky and shout loudly: “I’m free!” Freedom to do whatever I want whenever I want. Freedom to go wherever I want. I can leave over a pile of assignment, aside heavy psychological pressure, do not take up working, not to worry money. I can travel over the world and see things in a perspective that a human could never see. I would like travelling to many places without purchase any air tickets.
I would love to become a dog, German shepherd dog.Most of the people love me because I am an intelligent and enthusiastic working dog. My ancestors have lived with people for more than 12,000 years. We have started to stay near humans for food and warmth. Due to having highly developed senses of hearing and smell, I use these in communication and to track down my prey. I am talented and trained to work for humans. I am enjoying herding and guarding other domestic animals. Sometimes, I would go for hunting and for companionship too. I treat humans as part of my pack, and I accept my owner especially the policeman as the pack leader, and to follow his commands to sniff out explosives, criminals and drugs.
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ReplyDeleteI wish to be a faithful and an affectionate dog. I want to be human’s best friend and an apple of one’s eye by helping him to take good care of his house. If the human is down, I will approach him and lick his face so as to show that I care for him. I assure that the human will be as happy as a lark when I do that. I will be alert if there is a house on fire, I will wake the human up and escape from any danger. I like to play with the human because I can bring happiness for him. I also want to show my goodness to be a guider for those blind people. I will make sure that they cross the busy road safety so as to determine a friend in needs is a friend indeed.
ReplyDeletewritten by:Ting Chiew Hie(PPG BCN1)
If I had to be an animal,I would choose to be a bird.Birds have beak,beautiful feathers and the most important thing is birds have wings.By having beautiful feathers,I do not need to worry about what clothes to be bought or wore.Besides,I will not feel cold with the protection of feathers.With a pair of wings,I can go anywhere I wish without thinking about money.In addition,I can sing songs to human.Human will feel relax and forget about unhappy things.
ReplyDeletewritten by:Lim Leong Ping(PPG BCN1)
I want to be a beautiful and an affectionate pigeon because it symbolizes purity and freedom.
ReplyDeleteI like to fly high and low to the places that I desire.Sometimes, I also try to look for the only one in my heart but it seems like a dream because I don't know where he was. He left a deep sorrow in my heart.
I hope I can fly every way to identify and to be a heart of good for those who need especially to the orphans.I want to give them my true love. I have a bed of roses for them.
I want to be a pigeon which always flying in the air until a day to the end of my life.
written by : Connie Lim Kang Nee (PPG BCN1)
If i had to be an animal, i would like to be a silverback gorilla.
ReplyDeleteI can stay whole day in the jungle enjoying the fresh air and sleep on the carpet grass.
When i am free, i also can swing from a tree to another tree. Beside that i also can climb to the top of the tree to see the whole world.
Gorilla is very strong especially of his arm. Even a leopard also scare of him so no one will dare to bully me.
I also take care of green enviroment because i have leaves and fruit as food that make me vegetarian.
I wanna become gorilla because gorilla know how to use tool to find food.
I wanna be a Silverback cause i wanna be a good father and husband who responsibility for the safety and well-being of my family.
If I had to be an animal, I would like to be a bird. I would like to have freedom as what a bird has. I would like to fly all over the world using my own wings. When I’m tired, I can rest at any trees or caves I want. When I’m hungry, I can feed on any insects at any times. I feel like having no worries if I were a bird.
ReplyDeleteI will choose to be a snail. Snails are one of the earliest known types of animals in the world. There is evidence that they evolved more than 600 million years ago. I admire with the ability of snails which are able to adapt to a variety of living conditions. In addition, I also admire with the spirit of snail that once it got a target, it will be not afraid of anything to pursue its own end.
ReplyDeleteWritten by Law Ming Tsing (PPG BCN 1)
i will choose to be a bee. because it is hardworking, helpful, brave and useful to others. it is also self-reliance and protect itself when threatened. it able to produce a unique product(honey) and gives benefits to lots of field such as for medicinal purpose, health care, facial treatment, food supplements and so on. it always lives in colony and need each other for a better life. for me, i need people around me to support my life and give me strength and happiness. however, i am thankful to God to be born as a human being.
ReplyDeleteIf I could be any animal, I would be a bird so that bird live simple and freedom. Life like a small airplane, free flying in the blue sky and travelling to other country where I went. This life is no pressure. Therefore, I would watch the world from highs, watch things differently. When I tired after flying, I could rest and sing song on the tree. That life will not feel boring. As a bird is not bound to one branch forever, I will not be bound to the obstacles that life may bring. I love being a bird because life is not limitations on where I can go, and always playing hard.
ReplyDeleteIf I have to be an animal, I wish to become a panda! If I were found eating my favourite sweet bamboos in forest, they will surely serve me back like an emperor! Everything is prepared for me. I live in a luxuries suite, Jacuzzi, my own forest and waterfall, well protected and no worries of being attacked by other animals. Furthermore, human being even find a wife for me, what a wonderful life! Besides becoming a national emblem for China, I also represent WWF (World Wildlife Fund). I only have a small request from humans, I hope they can help me to fix the black patches around my eyes……
ReplyDeleteWritten by: Amy Yik (PPG BCN1)
I want to be a dolphin, a lovely pink dolphin. As I had to be an animal , then I want to be a pink dolphin, it should not be a problem, right? Haha......so that it seems I'm different, but also easier to recognize me. The sky has been conquered by humans, but the marine world still so enigmatic. I like swimming, but not really expert, then if I were dolphins, these problems will be solved. I can enjoy jumping and dancing and showing the most charming dance. I can revel in the whole world surrounded by nature. I can also shuttle in the broad boundless ocean, enjoy the mysterious ocean swim, and the unfathomable mystery of the underwater world and closer to all the marine life. I really hope to find out whether mermaid and Dragon King underwater? I also want to explore the disappearance of the Mayan culture underwater because the legendary Mayan civilization was sinking in the sea and disappeared. We all rumors will be the end of the world in 2012, is that true? So I turned pink dolphin seabed to find the answer, I will be tell for all mystery then.
ReplyDeletewritten by: HO SHU YUAN (PPG BCN1)
If i had to be an animals, i would like to be a dog. Since dog are the most friendly animal for human. The relationship between human and dog have been develop thousands years. Dog can know human language and understand their owner feeling. Dog can help human in many way such as lead the blind people, find drugs, shepherd, doorkeeper and even a baby sister. In the other hand, human are also very appreciate with the dogs contribution. I always hear about some very touching story about the friendship between human and dog. There are also some movie telling about the dogs life with human. Many human tread dog as their family member, because dogs are always understanding.
ReplyDeletePPG-BCN1(Ngieng Ngang Ghing)
If I had to be an animal, I would be an eagle so that I have longer and more evenly broad wings, and more direct, faster flight, large hooked beaks for tearing flesh from their prey, strong muscular legs, and powerful talons. The beak is typically heavier than most other birds of prey. They also have extremely keen eyesight which enables them to spot potential prey from a very long distance. I could soaring high, total freedom, see everything and they are a very intimidating animal in the animal kingdom and our wonderful planet. When I am tired flying, I could rest everywhere I want.
ReplyDeletePPG-BCN1(Yong Yee Sing)
If I had to be an animal, I want to be a bird flying high in the sky. Freedom would be my life, I could go wherever I want to, sing and eat without any obligation. I could rest and lead my life without worries.
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If I had to be an animal, i want to be a migratory bird. I can traverse the Sahara and the Mediterranean Sea in a one go, while other make a pit-stop in northern Africa before crossing.My family and I made the long journey south each year in search of warmer weather.
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ReplyDeleteIf i had to be an animal, i want to be a bird. The main cause is i like singing. Every morning, the waves sound incoming for ears like a concert. I thought: if i was a bird, i will hold a grand concert to call all my friend come to enjoy the concert.
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